Nowadays many students experience high school life and college life, and they realize the differences between high school life and college life. Now I am a college student, and I have experienced high school life and 3/4 college life. So I want to show about differences between high school life and college life.
In high school life, many students should follow the curriculum which arranged by school, and they have regular routine in high school life. But in college life, students should select their favorite curriculum from the Internet, if they can't select their favorite curriculum from Internet, then they can go to their department office to solve problems.
In high school life, teachers could notice students' behavior and take care of them. But in college life, although teachers could take care about you, in fact the attention is less than high school teachers. So students sometimes should depend on themselves.
In high school life, if your semester grades failed, you had chance to makeup examination, but in college life, if your semester grades failed, you had to rebuilt your semester in summer vacation. So in college life, you should let your semester grades pass as soon as possible, the way you didn't afraid you had to rebuilt your semester in summer vacation.
Finally, high school life and college life each have their own advantages, and these two different schools' life could let your life full of colorful.
2015年3月22日 星期日
Comparison About High School Life and College Life
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Good job. I like the way you organized your paragraphs around topics for comparison.
回覆刪除However, I think your thesis could still be improved. More than just showing that high school, and college are different, don't you have any interesting beliefs or opinions about these differences? For example, you might claim that high school teaches you to listen to others, but in college you learn to think independently. Or perhaps you feel that high school was much easier than college... Use opinions and personal beliefs to craft a more interesting thesis!
Also, don't say, "these different school lives could let your life full of color." Instead, say, "these different school lives fill our lives with color."