2015年5月6日 星期三

Compare Motorcycles to Cars

     Nowadays, there are many motorcycles and cars in Taiwan. People ride motorcycles and cars to go to school, work and solve problems. And there are good vehicles. But motorcycles and cars have many differences. I want to compare motorcycles and cars.

        First, I want to compare the wheels of motorcycles and cars. Motorcycles have two wheels. People should balance the motorcycle when people begin to ride because two wheels are not very stable. Cars have four wheels, and people don't need to balance the car. We can just sit in the seat and ride in a car easily.

         Second, I want to compare how many people can sit on motorcycles or cars. Motorcycles can carry three people. One sits in middle, another sits in front, and the other sit in behind. However, the shortcoming is the space is too crowded. Cars can let 5 people sit more, and its space is bigger than a motorcycle's, people can sit in the seats in cars comfortably.

       Third, I want to compare price about motorcycles and cars. Motorcycle's price is not expensive in fact, it costs about fifty thousands NT$ to one hundred thousands NT$. And I think most people can afford it. A car's price is more expensive than a motorcycle. It costs about  two hundred thousands NT$ to eight hundred thousands NT$, I think working people may buy cars.

         Finally, cars and motorcycles are convenient vehicles. And these two vehicles give people a lot of convenience. So I hope everybody can protect your cars and motorcycles. After all everybody wants to ride in these vehicles, so  measures of protecting cars and motorcycles must be do more. The way we have a safe and comfortable ground of driving cars and motorcycles.    

2 則留言:

  1. your main idea and content are coherent,but your final pagraph can provide more deatils

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  2. The price of cars ranges from two hundred-thousand to over a million NT$.

    This essay is well organized. Each body paragraph's topic sentence starts with "I want to". You should take that out. Instead say something like: "The prices of these different types of vehicles are quite different."

    Good effort!

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